I've read over my draft of Talia's sequel. I even sent it to a friend begging her to muddle through it and tell me:
- what's interesting
- what's boring
- what unanswered questions from book 1 do you still have
All of this is in the hopes I can revise like crazy while drafting book three and four in the series. Hopefully I won't commit any major word crimes during the process. :)
Just in case you've missed it...