tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7762622439282650752.post2473667490529820325..comments2023-09-17T07:46:57.550-05:00Comments on Charity's Writing Journey: Flirty Arguments and Physical Training Charity Bradfordhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01960821077619680661noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7762622439282650752.post-70363969342591887392013-11-22T14:11:42.053-06:002013-11-22T14:11:42.053-06:00That's a great idea Sheena-kay, thanks! It sou...That's a great idea Sheena-kay, thanks! It sounds like you've had some frustrations to work out this month. LOL, I hope 3 deaths and 2 close calls helped. Maybe this turns out to not be YA? Charity Bradfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01960821077619680661noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7762622439282650752.post-63229368651682348862013-11-22T12:08:06.218-06:002013-11-22T12:08:06.218-06:00If you want them to argue more you could cut out T...If you want them to argue more you could cut out Talia teasing that she thought he liked her shape and have her make a comment about what's so great about his. I had three deaths and two near deaths just six chapters into my Nano YA so I understand the need for changes. I just think that's too scary for the kind of Fantasy YA I'm writing. Like how this draft is going Charity.Sheena-kay Grahamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17712661419116636671noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7762622439282650752.post-73062148743260780722013-11-22T10:09:21.727-06:002013-11-22T10:09:21.727-06:00wow, that reads a bit weird. I mean I'd like m...wow, that reads a bit weird. I mean I'd like more flirting with my hubby. Not Alex. :DCharity Bradfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01960821077619680661noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7762622439282650752.post-10828770423809610002013-11-22T10:08:49.043-06:002013-11-22T10:08:49.043-06:00:) They still get over their squabbles way too fas...:) They still get over their squabbles way too fast, but I hate arguing. Flirting is much more fun. And yes, I know how you feel about gyms. Charity Bradfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01960821077619680661noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7762622439282650752.post-31735140515454300472013-11-22T10:08:41.032-06:002013-11-22T10:08:41.032-06:00*sigh* me too. Maybe we just need to jump straight...*sigh* me too. Maybe we just need to jump straight to the flirting and forget what we were angry about? Charity Bradfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01960821077619680661noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7762622439282650752.post-88344650402961424452013-11-22T09:27:37.468-06:002013-11-22T09:27:37.468-06:00Nice improvememt over the draft I read earlier thi...Nice improvememt over the draft I read earlier this summer. ... And you know why I love gym scenes. Kayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17718962327903140429noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7762622439282650752.post-3393495832455131782013-11-22T06:43:11.061-06:002013-11-22T06:43:11.061-06:00I wish arguments ended that easily in my house.I wish arguments ended that easily in my house.Alex J. Cavanaughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09770065693345181702noreply@blogger.com