Making progress!

Well, my decision earlier broke lose my creative juices again. At least I finally started working on revisions. Here is a sample of what my 1st round of revisions looks like on my Draguman draft. This is just 2 paragraphs. All the red is new or altered. Amazing! And it still isn't publishable. Just thought you could get a good laugh at how much things change from draft, to 1st revision and so on.

Ah, at least I feel like I am moving forward again. Yay for me!