Our family set three types of goals.
1. Personal/Individual
2. Family--we turned off all electronics, turned in phones and played games from 7 PM-8 PM
3. Couple--my hubby and I decided we needed to spend quality time together that didn't include the TV.
It's that couple goal that bring you an editing analogy today.
We started with yards of fabric that we cut into various sizes and shapes before sewing them together into strips, squares, block, lines and finally into a quilt. I won't go into details, but it's starts out looking like this after a few steps.
This can be compared to:
- figuring out who our characters are (picking out the fabrics)
- deciding how they will fit into the block (plotting the story arch)
- creating individual elements that make them likable (strips, triangles, squares)
- drafting scenes to move them along the arc (sewing together to create the block)
- adding transitions and further developing the story so it can flow from scene to scene (sewing the blocks together to create the quilt)
Now, hubby and I have been sewing together since our first dirt poor year of married life. However, we haven't done it in the last seven years or so. Probably since the last baby quilt we made. Anyway, this means we had to relearn how to work together--great for our 40 day challenge goal!
Last night we sewed all the blocks together and noticed that the pattern was off in one corner. One of us said to leave it. One of us couldn't stand to have it not perfect. Anyone want to guess who was who?
Let's just say, I'm glad I took the time to pick out a few seams and resew the 2 squares that were off. That's right. 2 of the four squares had been sewn in the wrong way and made it look like 4 blocks were wrong. It took me 20 minutes to fix and we ended up with this.
Sometimes when we are revising or editing our stories, we come across one little element that disrupts the entire plot. It might be a scene, it might be one description, it might be a character.
After working so hard and so long on a story, is it tempting to leave it in simply because its so small there's a chance no one else will notice?
Of course it is. But, if you take the extra time to rework it, you know you will be much prouder of your final accomplishment.
This quilt isn't finished yet, but at least its ready for the borders.
Last week I worked hard on Fade Into Me. Really hard. Now I'm going back and fixing some of those little squares that are turned slightly the wrong way. Then it will be ready for the borders. In my mind those are the final polishing touches of an editor and publisher.
Tally ho! and on we go!
You are both very talented! After about ten minutes, my wife would tell me to go annoy someone else for awhile.
ReplyDeleteGreat analogy. Yes, someone will notice those little things.
Wow, Alex, you're fast today! I think our talent lies more in the twenty-eight years that we've known each other than anything else. We've learned to be patient with each other. It has been nice working on a project together after all these years.
ReplyDeleteAnd you know someone WILL notice and they will be the person who takes the time to write a review. LOL.
Great analogy. You know someone is going to see it.
ReplyDeleteYou have good priorities.
ReplyDeleteThat makes for a very thoughtful analogy. Sometimes, just being okay with things a little off doesn't work. Work has to happen a little more to root-cause the little things since, in the end, they can have such a wonderful impact on the finished product, whether it's a quilt or a story.
ReplyDeleteYou and your husband make quilts together? How cool! That sounds like a lot of fun.
ReplyDeleteI know what you mean about fixing mistakes. I'll go back and rip out to fix things in my knitting all the time. No one else may notice it, but it'll bug me.
You hit a nerve there. I'm on my third revision and something feels off. I wanted to send it off like that but alas...I can't.
ReplyDelete@Nicole, they sure are!
ReplyDelete@Sheena-kay, sometimes. ;)
@Angela, very true. Sometimes we don't even notice what little thing will make that difference even when we put it in naturally, but if it's missing the writing will always feel a bit off.
@Liz, we don't quilt as often as we used to, but it made for great date nights when we were dirt poor.
@E, *hugs* Don't give up! Have you had beta readers take a look at it? I'm almost done with round three of revisions thanks to some amazing readers who could tell me what was "off".