Wednesday, May 7, 2014

IWSG and Conference Pitch Session Recap

I had a pitch session--my first live one ever--at LDStorymakers. I've done online pitches, but that is so different. All through my flight to Utah, and every night when I couldn't sleep, I went over and over my pitch. Changing it and trying my best to boil it down to the most important aspect of my book. In the end I did something different than my query.

I pitched to Eddie Schneider, Vice President of JABberwocky Literary Agency. And yes, he really does look this young and happy. I figure it's because he loves what he's doing and is a runner. A serious runner--unlike my last few years of on again off again.

Every time I saw him walking around the conference I didn't think of pitching to him (weird I know), but instead I thought, "I really need to get back into running and not stop."


Because I'm looking old and fat again. After losing 20 pounds last year and feeling great, I've put it all back on. I don't want to look my age. I don't want to look like a tired run down mom. Running and eating right really does change that.

He didn't ask my why I decided to pitch to him, but I had already decided my answer would be two fold. One, I need a no-nonsense get to work, logical and editorial agent on my side. And two, every time I looked at him I'd be reminded that my personal health is important to my overall image. Some people might have a problem with that, but like it or not, our public image eventually can effect our sales.

Okay, so this is how it went down. I arrived 10 minutes early and that's when it finally hit me FULL Force that I was about to pitch my book to a complete stranger. For weeks I'd been telling myself it didn't matter. It was just a good experience to have and if nothing came of it, no big deal. That worked until I was standing in front of the door waiting. All the "what ifs" started rattling around in my brain. The good and the bad.

I went in feeling just a bit shaky, clutching my one sheet of paper. Just in case. I'm proud to say I never used it and somehow the words tumbled out of my mouth on their own. Even my voice sounded weird to me because of my nerves, but somehow it didn't matter. I can even quote you pretty close to what I said.
The first thing you need to know is that everything you've ever believed about human evolution is a lie. A lie told to keep us from learning the truth. Aliens live among us. They work with us, teach our children. They are being punished and have been sentenced to watch over and protect their greatest mistake--us.

Even though Caedan Frey's family has fulfilled this duty for thousands of years, it doesn't free him from his obligation as Prince in the year of the Reparation. He must marry a human in two months or the throne will revert to a rival family. A family who's short lived reigns in the past ended in catastrophe for humans. Atlantis, Pompeii and the black plague were a few of their signatures. Even though Caedan doesn't believe humans will evolve to see, much less control the magic, he knows the sooner he marries the better for everyone.
I had more planned, but this is where he cut me off. I was startled and completely thrown off, but he was writing on a card and saying the story sounded interesting. All he needed to know was the title and genre.

My head was spinning. I was kicking myself for NOT starting with title and genre, but I was still in query mode where I like to put it last. Then I was thinking, "Wait! I didn't get to Ryanne. I'm doing this all wrong." The story is equally Caedan and Ryanne's, but I start with Caedan in the book.

So I'm sitting there trying to process that he wants to read pages when I've committed the sin of giving him an entire 30 seconds of back story. It's important to the whole book so I felt it was necessary. Now I'm scared that he'll start reading and think he was misled about the plot of Fade Into Me. What if he says no just out of irritation? Surely he wouldn't, but what if he did? See the circular destructive path of my thoughts?

Back to my pitch. I asked him a few questions about his style of agenting, asked if he had questions for me and we finished early.

Yeah! and then "He must think I'm an idiot!"

It is what it is and I can't change it. The important thing is he asked for pages, right? I've already sent the submission to him.

With my confidence bolstered, I sent out 6 more queries yesterday. Here are the new totals:

  • 12 sent (including pitch)
  • 6 still out (no reply yet)
  • 3 no thank you
  • 2 partials
  • 1 full

Have you ever pitched? Did you feel like throwing up before or after?
I sort of felt like being sick before AND after.

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  1. Oh wow, Charity! I think your pitch sounds awesome! Great job! And he asked for pages...yay!!

    Good luck with the query process! I'm still in it so maybe we can encourage each other. :)

  2. Well, no matter what you said, he still wanted to see some pages, so it's all good!
    And maybe he will motivate you to run again.

  3. I have never pitched before and the idea terrifies me. Well, speaking to people I don't know well terrifies me. At least face to face.

    That's awesome he wanted to see pages. Celebrate that.

  4. Best of luck to you. That agent is happy because JABberwocky represents Charlaine Harris of True Blood fame. In other words, they are flush to bursting with cash and can pick and choose. I hope you land JABberwocky. If you do, then you got it made sistah. But if you don't, don't sweat it. That agency is kind of like a "dream" agency.

  5. You did it Charity. Let nothing take away from the fact that you faced a challenge head on and did it. Handsome guy. I think your pitch is great.

  6. Wow thanks for sharing! Can I ever relate. Isn't is amazing how much confidence we lose if we aren't at our fighting weight? and if we're no longer young and "upcoming"?

  7. Thanks everyone! It was nerve wracking, but a good experience. I'll keep you posted if anything happens with this one or any of the other submissions I have out.

  8. You have two partials and a full!?! Wow. That's amazing. And the fact that he asked for pages...!!! Bask in that glow for a while.

  9. Congrats on making it through the pitch. If he wants to read something, you couldn't have done it that badly. I suspect he's used to talking to very nervous (ie terrified) writers.

  10. Pitching sounds scary. I think you must have done all right. I'm hopeless at that sort of thing and come over as if I've had a lobotomy!
    All the best with your work.

  11. Everytime I have to stand in from of a Judge with my 6 month review report I damn near hyperventilate. And that's knowing the Judge will likely just read and approve the orders without ever even looking at me. I'd pass out if I sat in front of an actual agent with a pitch.

    You did well, as evidenced by the request. Bravo.

  12. Well, his response was positive... that's a good thing? Right?
    Pitching sounds super-scary... eeeeeek!
    Good luck with everything!
    Writer In Transit

  13. I remember my 1st pitch. I felt the same way you did afterward. (love the mini-video) Imagine how an agent or editor feels listening to all those pitches. The take-away is that he asked for pages. Wishing you the best.

  14. No, never have. But I've read about what agents feel when facing the pitcher. I thought it would calm me down if I ever tried it. They understand how nervous a pitcher usually is. They understand the pressure of doing it right. And they allow for it.

    Congrats. Sounds like your story is about to find a home. :-)

    Anna from Shout with Emaginette


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