Thursday, December 16, 2010

Updated Query from Query Blogfest

Everyone gave some excellent advice. Here is my updated version from the Query Blogfest.

UPDATED from comment suggestions.

Dear Dream Agent,

Astronomer Talia Shannon hides her magical abilities out of fear of becoming the national science project. She gleans energy from Sendek's binary suns to heal herself and others, communicates with trees, and is clairvoyant. Unfortunately, her prophetic nightmares point to an approaching invasion. She has spent her life searching for the scientific proof needed to warn and protect her planet while guarding her secret.When her prophetic nightmares point to an approaching invasion, she searches for the scientific proof needed to warn her planet while guarding her secret.

After thousands of years in exile, the Dragumen, a human dragon hybrid created in Sendek’s past, have returned to claim the planet as their own. Smarter and stronger than ever, they plan to wipe out the humans on Sendek and claim it for their own.

Talia's blood lines lead back to As a direct descendant of the mage who created the Dragumen, Talia is the key to their destruction giving her the power to destroy them--if only she can learn how. Talia must learn to trust the magic coursing through her veins. if she wants to survive the invasion. When science fails to protect her way of life, magic becomes the only hope.

PERSONALIZED INFO. SENDEK is a complete science fantasy novel of approximately 83,000 words. The complete manuscript is available at your request. Thank you for your time and consideration.

Sincerely,

Charity Bradford
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